Collaboration Crit And Art Of

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 Today as a group, we presented our project to the course. We made a Google slides presentation containing our groups art of. I have linked this below and also uploaded screenshots as examples. I was excited to present as I was proud of the work in which we have produced for this project and feel that our end result matches the brief specifications. 


Link

Funny Bones Presentation








After presenting our slide and explaining the processes we each went through in order to complete the work, we then showed off the final animation. 




After showing off our animation, the main criticism Simon had towards it, was that it was 3:10 rather than the specified 2 minutes. This was a problem as it meant we had not officially met the brief. We would have to reduce the animation to 2:20 at the maximum which is 10% in order to meet the brief. However this was not the worse problem to have in the world as we had put in the work, now all we had to do was trim it down. This could be done by editing out certain parts and changing the speed of each scene. Simon felt that some scenes dragged out for far too long and that you could get the same amount of information if the shot was quicker, it would just take up less time.

Another change Simon felt was needed was of the final shot in which Mooms head is manipulated into strange shapes. He felt that this did not match the rest of the animation and stood out as a result of that. I originally included this shot as I wanted to convey that Moom is a mad scientist. Its meant to stand out and look crazy to show his mental state, that's the joke. However Simon is our audience and if he felt it is out of place then other people will feel the same. This could pose a larger problem with our animation. 

Overall I feel that the presentation went well and that we were able to show off the hard work it took in order to produce the animation. 

I will improve upon the faults in the animation so that it can be the best version before submitted to the deadline. 




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